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rokumanxes
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 Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 12:53 pm |
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I really don't quite know.
Hah.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HbvC20lDw4Q
I was bored, and hadn't had any sleep, and I just figured... What the hell?
I really don't quite know if it's funny or not though.
I mean, I guess there's always, "nobody's harder on you than yourself" kind of thing goin' on, but... at the same time, I can't quite feel as though it isn't justified. Hah.
Let me know?
At least I'm not stinkdude and uber.
(just kidding, I love you guys.)
(...not really. I probably just don't dislike you guys as much as everyone else does. =P )
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ChaoticFox
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:15 pm |
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It wasn't particularly "LOL" funny, but it was pretty amusing at certain points. If anything, I'd say maybe it comes off as a little too nice and apologetic, which sort of puts a damper on certain jokes.
Your writing has great flow though, and your delivery isn't bad... although it seems more like something that would be written in a humor column in a newspaper than a stand-up act intended to elicit belly laughs.
The ending was pretty brilliant though. Good job.
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Galaxy Man
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 1:17 pm |
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Yeah I agree with Fox.
T'was good, I especially liked the pacing.
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Tuberz
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:16 pm |
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rokumanxes wrote:
At least I'm not stinkdude and uber.
(just kidding, I love you guys.)
(...not really. I probably just don't dislike you guys as much as everyone else does. =P )
Okay, that sorta hurt...
No wait he said we're okay,
No wait he's still mean... just joking 
But seriously... how are we so bad? _________________ Comm.BA wrote: I loved the way that [musical term] sounded against the [musical term]. And the [musical term]! It was a fucking great [musical term].
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jigger
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:20 pm |
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Because you take all that stuff too seriously. I'm positive it was just a joke, you gotta learn to just roll with it and ignore that shit, you should know by now that we're just giving you a hard time.
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Tuberz
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:25 pm |
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I guess, I still gotta get used to it. Sorry... Oh well, otherwise this was cool!
_________________ Comm.BA wrote: I loved the way that [musical term] sounded against the [musical term]. And the [musical term]! It was a fucking great [musical term].
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Jay C
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:49 pm |
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Thunder cunt! =D
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rokumanxes
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 11:12 am |
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Hah. I don't really have anything against either of you.
You're both no bad as anyone else.
I really don't know how the two of you became the whipping boys of the place.
Lol
I've got another on written and I'm writing another tonight.
Expect two new Green Spots tomorrow.
Hmm... Dunno about that name.
What do you all think? Lol
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Galaxy Man
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 12:06 pm |
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'Green spots' sounds like a kind of sexual disease.
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Jay C
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:28 pm |
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Roku's G-spot. Sounds awesome.
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protobabe
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:16 pm |
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Do you know where a man's G spot is? ....:/
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Comm.BA
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:37 pm |
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Isn't it like the asshole or around there? I feel like I've read that somewhere.
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Johnny Tijuana
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:37 pm |
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I'm pretty sure it's the penis.
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protobabe
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:55 pm |
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Comm.BA
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:57 pm |
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Yeah, there. I was in the general ballpark.
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