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Comm.BA
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 9:44 pm |
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Joined: Sat Mar 14, 2009 1:24 am Posts: 6153 Location: IN THE SAME HOUSE AS P.BABE, SOMEONE SAVE ME!!!
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I sure do like not making enough money to afford car insurance and probation.
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Tuberz
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 6:03 am |
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Joined: Thu Oct 08, 2009 11:10 pm Posts: 4495 Location: I COME FROM THE LAND DOWN UNDER
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http://soundcloud.com/tuberz-mcgee/solipsism-draftComposing Chiptune ideas for the next album. Can I get some criticisms? This track is supposed to be for Chiptune/String Quartet. An amalgamation of Synthetic and Organic elements. Can I get some feedback. Less production stuff, more actual enjoyment of composition stuff. Also, the album is going to be conceptual. Exploring the elements of Certainty. Agnosticism, Belief, Certainty, Doubt, Determinism, Epistemology, Estimation, Fallibilism, Fatalism, Justification, Nihilism, Probability, Skepticism, Solipsism, Truth and Uncertainty. Therefore, we're looking at 16 tracks. And I'm far too stubborn to make any of them less than 3 minutes long. So we're looking at a more substantial album. Any criticism dudes?
_________________ Comm.BA wrote: I loved the way that [musical term] sounded against the [musical term]. And the [musical term]! It was a fucking great [musical term].
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Jay C
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 1:41 am |
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Dat Melody. This is a fucking brilliant mix dude. It seriously is. The droning strings part at the end of each phrase is consistent throughout the song and it reminds me of the Title Theme to Metroid (which is never a bad thing). I'd only say that the very beginning needs to be tweaked. The rising motion with the strings at the beginning make me feel funny but it could just be the Makers and Jameson that I had tonight. This is all I really have to say for a first sweep. Are you alright with me posting it other places for feed back?
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D-structman
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 4:43 am |
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Dang Tuberz, that was sexy. Good balance of melody and counter melody. Very interesting to listen to.
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Helios
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 7:09 pm |
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Tuberz, dat got som chill swag. I think it might possibly maybe be pretty solopsistic if we can even know that it isn't an illusion of my mind...
Jokes aside, it's good. I, being me, might recommend some tweaking so that it picks up more at the end and does some really creative stuff with the already creative melody. But, for the vibe you were going for, it was good. I'd be interested to see how it flows with the other parts of the album.
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Tuberz
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 9:36 pm |
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Joined: Thu Oct 08, 2009 11:10 pm Posts: 4495 Location: I COME FROM THE LAND DOWN UNDER
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You guys are the best. Seriously. If it wasn't for you guys, I don't know if I'd be doing music today honestly! You guys give me such heartwarming feedback. I'll share some more tracks here as they come. ;D
_________________ Comm.BA wrote: I loved the way that [musical term] sounded against the [musical term]. And the [musical term]! It was a fucking great [musical term].
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Megette
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 12:27 pm |
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Let me preface this by saying that I don't ordinarily listen to chip tunes so I probably cannot give you any specific feedback but I liked it! It sounded haunting and was an interesting listen. Keep at it Tubz.
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holycrapman
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 7:36 pm |
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That was really good. I'm not good at giving constructive feedback for something music related, but if you need to do something I'd recommend just adding something around the end that gives it a little more substance.
Other than that, the tones and melodies work together perfectly.
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Comm.BA
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 10:28 pm |
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Joined: Sat Mar 14, 2009 1:24 am Posts: 6153 Location: IN THE SAME HOUSE AS P.BABE, SOMEONE SAVE ME!!!
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I loved the way that [musical term] sounded against the [musical term]. And the [musical term]! It was a fucking great [musical term].
Seriously though, it's good, I like it. You get a Badassery Seal of Approval.
_________________ "Divide by Sharpedo? Pft, more like devoured by Sharpedo!" - Jay C; MAGfest 8
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Tuberz
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 12:51 am |
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Comm.BA wrote: I loved the way that [musical term] sounded against the [musical term]. And the [musical term]! It was a fucking great [musical term]. That is the best thing I have ever read. EVER.
_________________ Comm.BA wrote: I loved the way that [musical term] sounded against the [musical term]. And the [musical term]! It was a fucking great [musical term].
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Helios
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 7:07 pm |
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Get to go to the 25th Anniversary Legend of Zelda: Symphony of the Godesses Concert.
AWWWWWW YEAH
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Cowbox
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 8:09 pm |
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Dude that's old news nobody gives a shit.
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